Remote Control

Experimental piece

Remote Control

Lavish chair

Dark room

Cold dinner

Telly doom

Warring world

Sporting fumble

Beached Whales

Celebrity bumble

Family laughter

Knead dough

Sudden murder

MIracle grow

Up, up

Numbers go

Buzzing noise

Remote control

Will weak

Life mundane

Up tomorrow

Start again

Author's Note

Just a contest piece.

Reviews

[Elissa; the genuine art..]

I really enjoyed this piece.
It has a lot of character.
I intend to add it to my favorites.
I hope to read more from you soon.

-Elissa :)

[The Wave]

nice!
this one made me smile

overall, written well, nice flow. ..not sure about some lines though, such as, "telly doom" but very fun to read indeed
good job