Red balloon

A sad tale of a child loosing her balloon

Once upon an early moon
Along flew a red balloon
Lost by a crying child
Chased by a Dad looking wild
Popped by a Ravens Claw
Now on the dirty floor
Rests the deflated red balloon
In the shadow of the moon.

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

I some how feel sad, nice effect in wording.

[phil]

Thank you, I feel if a poem evokes any emotion it is a success.

Thank you for the feed back.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Bleak and fantastic, well done, great read.

[phil]

Thanks. Really appreciate the feedback.