women

just an opinion. i state it like its a fact so....yah...sorry

In times of peace.

They are discriminated

In times of war

They are targeted.

But this time

They will be praised.

Given the respect

For giving life.

Given appreciation

Because some get none.

Given recognition

Because they are strong.

And if one falters, buckles

What ever the reason may be.

Lend a hand instead of lending judgement.

They would do the same for you.

Reviews

[That_Girl]

I always think of 'Keep Ya Head Up' when I read about women's rights. Well done!! Loved it :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Ah this is very nice and true! Awesome job my friend!

[kayla]

Aww I like this(: It's cute. More guys should be writing poems like this :P lol

[nigrum homonculus]

haha thanks!

[xxxrawr_friendxxx]

That's so sweet. :'D Thanks man. Good job :3

[nigrum homonculus]

thanks! glad you liked it.

[Baby Ricochet]

I like it. Considering the poems I post about women portray them as the muse of all my desires this one takes a different tak. Seems like more of a mom thing than a Ooh little girl you're driving me out of my mind thing and that's beautiful. OOH I just got an idea. THanx...

[nigrum homonculus]

thanks man. i really appreciate that. oh? no problem!

[Melody]

I love it. :) great work, truly stunning.

[nigrum homonculus]

thankies melody!

[afra]

beautiful .....i love it .....great write

[nigrum homonculus]

thanks again afra. glad you enjoyed it