childish attitude

eh...i've been ranting a lot...i guess that's where my inspiration comes from. i hope this dosen't crash and burn like some of my others.

Its not that I’m evil

Its because I don’t care

Your problems are miniscule

To the problems out there.

I know your ego is crushed

Coz your parents said you’re grounded

But how is that life changing?

That has left me damn dumbfounded.

Are you alive?

Are you still breathing?

If you’re reading this

You’ve answered yes.

Stop f*****g moaning.

For god sake act your age

Not your shoe size.

Your life is not a stage

So don’t be so dramatic

Reviews

[The Refined Poet]

great poetic rant

[Tai Ryens]

I enjoy your rants a lot, hehe.

[nigrum homonculus]

haha thank you tai.

[That_Girl]

I love this! I read so many poems about such trivial matters. The other day I was rereading something I wrote and nearly vomited at how 'childish' I was being. :p Awesome poem! Deff didn't crash and burn!

[nigrum homonculus]

haha i know right? wait...what was that? thanks for that!

[That_Girl]

Something I DELETED. lol Why? Is there something I posted that is childish???

[xxxrawr_friendxxx]

LOL. I agree with your opinion. I've been grounded since the beginning of summer. Do I act like I'm dying? Nope. It's really not that horrible peoples.
I enjoy your "rants" lol. :D

[Baby Ricochet]

HA! that's awesome! I could learn something from this.