dead relationship

some of this is actually true. that is all.

She likes her MTV

I like my sky sports 3

She likes discovery

I like my comedy

She likes her brown sugar

I like my meshuggah

she likes her soap opera

I like my tense fifa

She likes her cosmetics

I like my athletics

We can’t even agree

To flippin disagree

The only thing we share

Is the bed upstairs…

Reviews

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

Unfortunately, even that last part may not last for long. Sad how people drift apart, and love that was once vibrant...dies. This is sad, but sadly true much of the time. I admire relationships that can weather long years and stay alive and loving.

[Baby Ricochet]

HA! Good rhymes. You can have a good relationship and disagree on almost everything. I didn't share my wife's fasination with Anne Rice Novels (Vampire series writer before Twilight) nor did she share my fasination with weapons. Those things are trivial.

[nigrum homonculus]

oh thats like 1 thin though. like me an my ex were poles apart. complete opposites and whoever said "opposites attract" can suck my african dick. no way in blue hell is that true.

[Baby Ricochet]

LMAO!!!!

[Harley (arbiter)]

Haha! :D nice man. That was pretty good

[nigrum homonculus]

thanks bro! glad you liked it

[afra]

i love i rhyme and flow was amazing ...well done ...my mom and dad are like that

[nigrum homonculus]

thanks for that! oh damn that can't be good lol

[That_Girl]

Ohhhh me likey... ALL OF IT! :D It flows really well and there aren't any rhyming hiccups. Nice!!

[nigrum homonculus]

thanks! i tried tinkering with the flow a bit so i'm glad you liked it!

[BIIKAY]

oooo,,very cool! well not the actual actions but the piece of writing..i like!

[nigrum homonculus]

thanks! glad you did