that worry.

after writing a poem...i was overcame with some doubt. like....hard to explain. anyway i wrote about it.

something is boiling within

bubbling away.

eating away.

weakening, distracting.

time and energy consuming.

pondering

pondering

a million year worry

no solution

no conclusion

just a build up to more mental contusions.

fusions of doubt and anxiety

mental chemistry at its deadliest.

poisoning this once pure thought process

destabilizing this level head  

Reviews

[quinfinn]

curiosity makes me beg the question....that "million year worry"? a provocative and thoughtful write indeed. well penned.

[nigrum homonculus]

million year worry? well everytime i write something there is always a fault i cling to for which seems like an eternity. idk what else to name it lol. thanks for reading quinfinn i really appreciate the kind review

[Sirius King]

i 2nd guess my work all of the time... i think being an artist (of any kind) makes you an automatic perfectionist...it comes with the territory

[nigrum homonculus]

i guess so. kind of annoying when i write mostly off instinct rather than structure. thanks again

[Sirius King]

sometimes those are the best ones, free flow

[Baby Ricochet]

No solution no conclusion just a build up to mental confusion. Good one

[nigrum homonculus]

thanks for reading BR. i appreciate it.