Chelsea grin

i edited it a bit made it longer. might change it more so its more... believable. inspired by the band on my profile page.

a man, a mistake.

a walking contradiction.

thought it would be funny.

to make drunken accusations.

the claims this man made.

intoxicated by his own doing.

blamed the world with his middle finger.

because nobody listened to his "prophecies"

he then turned to me.

spitting in my face,

with all his fury.

i began to judicate.

He thought his words,

So elegant and ignorant,

Would fly out of his mouth unscathed.

so his arrogant smile is now bloodied...

and permanent.

Author's Note

any pointers on how to write better in this style?

Reviews

[poeticpiers]

Yes. Study meter get hold of a good source book Ie Lewis Turcos book of forms
Your themes are fresh but you do not do yourself justice. You have some skill at rhyming. Reas your wors aloud and unless they flow as smoothly as warm honey on hotcakes You need to re edit until they do.
We can always improve no matter how long we have been writing Poeticpiers

[OctoberDawn]

Great poem, it really incites the intended emotions.