Don't push me

how i feel with some people right now. oh every captial letter in the last stanza spells, GTFO (get the f**k out) just something i tried messing with.

Whether it be physically, or mentally.

Just don’t push me.

We aren’t enemies. Stop with the idiocy

 

Don’t barge my upbeat attitude,

With your words of sarcastic gratitude.

If hell opened its gates,

Walk through it and pray that it rains.

 

Don’t have a temper tantrum

When my minds my only sanctum.

Im lost to get away from you.

This hollow head will only let the words through.

 

Get with it, stick with it.

Too tired of being crowded.

Forget the conversation,

Orientate yourself without me. 

Reviews

[Alana McGuire]

Geeeeez! This is awesome!
I'm usually not one for rhyming poetry, but you did it extremely well. Bravo for that.
When I read it, it seemed to flow almost like a rap in my head. I usually don't listen to rap, but this, I would listen to for sure.
I like this even more for opening my eyes to things I don't usually surround myself with.

[That_Girl]

Haha I love how you incorporated GTFO. Besides that though, the poem is stron and very relatable. "Words of sarcastic gratitude" and "My mind's the only sanctum" are stand out lines or me but the entire poem was great.