THE HOLE

THE WISH OF TRUE LOVE

The hole:

 

I can't believe the hole,

that you've left in my heart.

I still can't speak your name,

Because it tears my world apart.

 

I didn't want to fall in love,

Cause that would make me feel.

And loosing you has hurt so much,

I wish the whole thing wasn't real.

 

I didn't think me capable,

Of possessing so much love.

So many years of misery,

Made me not believe in love.

 

But I cannot deny you,

Because you answered every prayer.

From a fantasy of a little girl,

You where real and you took me there.

 

You where everything I'd dreamed of,

In that fairy tale of mine.

A place I wish I could remain,

Because that place was so divine.

 

There was a crash and then I landed,

in a place called reality.

and it turned out You were not the prince,

that was waiting there for me.

 

But the stars brought us together,

And our time was really short.

It was good and we were happy,

Through you so much was taught.

 

So I will always love you

And lock you in my heart

 no matter where life takes me

You taught me where to start

 

Written by Mandi Reddan

Copyright: 2014

All rights reserved

Reviews

[Amused Penguin]

Some corrections: "losing you..." (not "loosing you..."). "You were..." (not "You where...") x2.

A suggestion: next poem don't feel bound to rhyme and meter. Instead, emphasize the emotion.