for my friends

an explanation

I loved once

I loved and lost

it's that simple

the world moved on

and I lost myself

I could not find my way

until I loved again

but once more I lost

and now I am alone

it was stil that simple

I write to you my friends

to let you know of my past

to let you know why I wrote

and now why I cannot

 

Reviews

[Deepshikha]

Don't fret over it. It's the way of the world, and I assume you still have friends, do you not? [;D]

[Mauricio Montoya]

Right on for putting out such a simple piece that say a lot, we are what we are and hope to make the best of it with what we got,
Great job well done.

[Rachael]

Aw, Pat. Sometimes a lot of good writing can come out of sadness. I know mine mostly does, although it's not very good. hah but I hope you can be happy!!

[Akshat♥]

friends are everything in one's life...
nice poem:)

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is simple but strikes with amazing force.
I could really feel the loss in your words.
The candid speech is what really drives the emotion.