Good bye sweet friend

As life's passed by I've had to give up many a things. This is just one of the recent feelings I surrendered. Enjoy.

I will say my farewells 

This is my cue 

As the grip loosens 

And the horror grows 

You're lost between worlds 

Love and obligation 

A beautiful girl with so much expectations 

Once bright eyes now filled with fear 

Be brave sweet girl 

Love will save you 

My love will save you

Good bye sweet friend 

I've loved, I've loved, I've loved you 

So I have to go away now 

Save the beautiful girl she loves you so 

Be kind be gentle make my dream true 

Last touch last glance of farewell 

It's not your fault but my choice 

Deep down I know you would choose so too 

The fall will kill me but I will not hurt 

As for my hearts now with you 

In your free hand to heal help and love

Author's Note

My first post. Scrutiny is most appreciated! :)

Reviews

[Vidya Bacchus]

It is so sad when we lose those we love .You have penned this with so much feeling and written so well :)

[Aethereal]

Parting is such sweet sorrow, but there's always tomorrow. Change fair wells to farewells.

[Tan-90]

Positivity yet again! Many thanks for taking the time to look at all my work today. Your feedback has been most constructive.

[Aethereal]

You're welcome! I enjoyed your poetry very much, or I would not have read all all of them. Keep going.

[Aethereal]

Be sure to change the other fair well to farewell.

[Tan-90]

Right, I completely missed the latter ones! will fix them right away. Thanks again for your encouragement!

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Good byes are never easy, this was a wonderful write:)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

[Tan-90]

Thanks so much. :)

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Your very welcome:))))))))))))))))))))))))))