Our love

What is you love like?

Our love rises with the sun

and sits with the moon at night.

It blooms into a rose of grave beauty

as the sparks of love between us

are ignited and roar.

It sings songs of harmony and

plays forever in mymind.

Your voice echoes the definition

of our love in my mind.

Words from humans can't discribe it

and an artist coulndn't paint it.

For our love is inside of our hearts

and hasn't any shape or form.

It lives on as we do

and nothing more than that.

Author's Note

Just read it tell me what you think. PLEASE AND THANK YOU! :>D

Reviews

[ANNA]

Words from humans can't discribe it
and an artist coulndn't paint it.
For our love is inside of our hearts
and hasn't any shape or form.


Love that part..It funny what love can make us write. Very beautiful

Much lov n respect,
Anna=D

[Sarah]

Wonderful description. I enjoyed the comparison of your love to nature. That's gorgeous. The first couple lines were my favorite! =)

[Chistie]

Reminds me of song lyrics. I like it!!! Good job!!
Maybe you should try and put it to music!!