He stands again.

Pulsating with good vibes and helpless smiles

lies a girl and a boy

in the dew of the grass

they sit and interlace thier fingers

and speak of the future

thier hands losen with every passing word

as the two lovers break embrace

and walk in two diffrent directions

his head spining as he falls down dizy

he stays till morning

untill her door opens

she walks right by

with quick simple steps

the boy falls again

his head spining as fast as planets orbiting the sun

he stands again.

Reviews

[Cats Eye]

Nicely written, i enjoyed reading this, awsome job on this

[Legion]

Love will do this to you. I like the write.

[Gabrielle]

adam, you don't even know how much i love this.
it flows amazingly.

im jealous.