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Just a simple boy

walking down a simple street

a simple tune in his head

and not a care in the world

boy meets girl

care turns into love

and suddenly hes head over heals

 

Just a complicated girl

walking in a complicated world

her complicated life in her head

she wonders why she even tries anymore

girl meets boy

complication turns into love

and suddenly shes on again.

Reviews

[J]

Short and quite sweet sketch of opposites attract ~ everyone's happy! Nice.

[Ashley]

i liiiiiike this mr. adam!
gabba likes it too. (:

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This was a wonderful view of sincere and honest love at first sight. :)
Simple, yet you carried the emotion through well and right into the readers hearts.

I did find one mispelled word in line 4, "wrold" should be "world"

Other then that it was very nice.