Just Because...

Just because...

I make mistakes dosn't mean i'm a bad person

Although some pepole see it that way

I wish they could understand the way I see things too

Life is hard and I give it my best

I try harder everyday

I learn from my mistakes

I put on a fake smile sometimes..

Even know inside i could feel complely  down

I wish people could see

and I wish  people could understand..

I'm not perfict... I make mistakes too!

 

 

Reviews

[MarchAprilMayJuneJuly]

seriously! people judge other people before they even get to know them, and so we just pretend like everything is okay... before you know it they think you have a perfect life!! ha! funny how people are blindly hypocrites, and they criticize you for your wrongs. i can relate to this, which is good.

~may

[Display Name]

I like the honesty and sincerity of this poem, yes we all make mistakes, but many can't admit that,,, well done.

[FrikinFrancesca]

Wow, I love this poem, It really speaks alot about a person. You can really relate. This is a wonderful poem. ^^

By the way, Thank you for the review!~

[PoemRodent]

This is well written and states much truth. Remember that in life making mistakes is part of growing to be better. Its refusal to continue to make mistakes we lose the meaning.

Good write!

Love and Thoughts,

Dostani

[Leo Gems]

The message in the poem is clear.. and very true. I was about to say you have a misspelling or two!
Then I realized hey.. she's not being perfect.. just being an original!
Very creative.. I approve.. I really do! LOL..