A Grasp of Air

Drownding in life,

Trying to grab a grasp of air,

Not knowing what to do,

All the water is coming in now,

Looks like theres no escape,

Must keep above it all,

Must put up a  fight,

Untill at last,

I slip...

 

 

 

Author's Note

just something i felt

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

Within a few short lines you sum up depression and how you can feel things are becoming overwhelming with water threatening to entrap you.

[Wicahpi]

A feeling we all can relate to.
Glad you can write through it!

[Lauren Beth]

Nice write...definitely a feeling I can relate to! Shows deep emotion.

[Teresa]

Great write...the words definitely paint a picture!!