winter leaf

About a dear teature who died.

The winter leaf has fallen,
Upon the grassy floor.
A dear life was stolen,
To walk through heavens doors.

I dedicate to you this rhyme,
To treasure and to love.
A soul taken before your time,
Your in the land above.

Author's Note

Please tell me if I have any grammar issues or it can be improved

Reviews

[Ted Kniffen]

A very good tribute, Sarah. One thing though, in the last line watch the difference in your and you're (you are) in this case you're is correct.

[Lady Glitter]

Sweet leaf. But for all we know, they go somewhere. They certainly are reborn into new matter. I love leaves in fall and winter. Nice easy-to-read rhyming poem about nature.

[Scott Metro]

A very nice tribute.



Enjoyed it.
Scott

[Sarah]

Thanks. He was an amazing person.

[Scott Metro]

:)
Scott......