my last days

this is about leaving.

It seems like yesterday i first walked through these doors,

Scary teatures, and tall white walls.

It seemed like it would last forever,

Walking to school every morning.

Talking with friends and playing games,

I never thaught it would come to an end.

All those teatures telling us what to do,

Where to be and were to go.

Then the leavers asembaly came,

Friends crying hugging each other.

Nothing is ever going to be the same again,

We are all going are seporet ways.

Now as we walk out the doors on last time,

We say are last goodbye,

But I know we'll all still be friends.

Cause we're friends for ever untill the end 

It seems like only yesterday i first walked through these doors,

But today will be my last before i leave forever.

 

 

 

Reviews

[Dearantlers]

Beautiful poem! I too know the feeling, though it was at a few day long summercamp, but my friends and I got close, and to know I'd probably never see any of them again is sad. This is my emotions put into words exactly! I loved it.

[Meghan]

I know this exact feeling, I went through it last year with my Senior year of High School. You wrote beautifully of the bittersweet feelings of moving on. Like the others said, there were quite a few spelling errors, but otherwise great job!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is Bittersweet... I felt the sadness of leaving friends behind to forge on to
their future. Although, I do agree with Emmma Claire, you have spelling errors that need to be corrected, nevertheless, it was a nice write.

[emma]

very nice. liked it alot, but there a lot of spelling errors. i suggest you use a word document or something and use spell check. a great poem though:)

[Me]

Beautiful write