broken heart

about someone who is in love

What is the point of a heart,

When it only gets broken.

What is the point of breath,

When you only make me breathless.

What is the point of a sole,

When it only gets stolen.

What is the point of sight,

When you only blind me.

What is the point in my life,

When you only hurt it.

 

Reviews

[Kesav Easwaran]

Meaningful unanswerable questions from a broken heart...nicely written piece, Sarah...expresses the pain inside eloquently

[emma]

questions that haunt everyone at least once in their life. very nicely written:)

[A.A.Romanczuk]

a matter-of-fact set of statements :) good.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

It is bold and strong emotion. I'd love to see one explain how they still belong in a person's life after something like this. I dont think there is any defense.

[Canicus]

I like it. and yeah that is a nice question

[KAREN]

Very nice write, love the question, what is the point?

[HeIsWe]

I really like this and no how this feels.