Clouds in the night

The moon luminates

Stars shine in the sky

Silently sedate

As the clouds roll by

 

The dark blackish blue

The peace of the night

The clouds frolic through

By the moon lit white

 

A touch of silver

Infused with gray

Wind blows a shiver

As clouds dance and play

 

Together they crash

Cosmicly collide

A treasure that lasts

That calms the inside

 

Reviews

[Michael X]

Wow, Allison, this is lovely in imagery and meaning, as well as the colorful,
sparkling detail that brings the vision into light, and that being talent,
your talent for wording, the rhymes and formula set the depth into sequence
and creates an excellent flow in form and feature. its beautifully written!

[Angelic Darkness]

This is a wonderful poem. There is a peace and tranquility here.
I love these lines: Silently sedate

As the clouds roll by



The dark blackish blue

The peace of the night

The clouds frolic through

AD

[Adela Muresan]

Wow! This is beautiful.
It's very well penned and the ending is so special and well chosen. You should think about entering it in some contests, if you didn't already lolz.

A.M.

[Sarah]

Beautiful. Your description is flawless & I could honestly see the night sky as I read it. You're very talented, I envy your skill. :)

[Brandon Dunbar]

Very nice. Another good piece.

[larryb]

I like it simple but flows nice :)

[~*666 Draven Von Tepes ..]

nicely written its different from your usual lol