Him...

About this guy I like that probably doesn't even know I exist !

He's taken my heart,

But will never know it,

He so amazing,

So mysterious,

Oh how I love him so,

But he will never know,

Why can't he see,

He's the only one for me !

Author's Note

I hope you like it ! It came straight from the heart ! It is about this kid on my bus !

Reviews

[Voice11]

Short, too the point. Not bad

[VeCeWall]

Amazing that's great piece of work i love the poem.

[Kara]

short but sweet :) i like it.

[Cassandra D.]

I really enjoyed reading it. It was very short, but it was soo sweet. I liked it so much that I read it over and over. (I know how you feel with love..lol) And I do agree with Beregond and The Silk Poetess...anyways, this was a very sweet, amazing, awesome poem!

[wordfairy]

(Been there, done that.) Good job.

[shelbii]

i know the feeling...lol

like it lots:)

[theunknownchick]

Short But Ahmazing. Great Job.

[*** Hey Jude***]

You have shared your feelings with vigor! Your right, love always does come from the depths of the heart! ~ Jude :-)

[Fran Marie]

He won't know unless you tell him how you feel~ Nicely penned

[Jemma]

A kid on your bus ay :p

Ahh young love >.<

Don't worry though like I said its young love. usually just ends up a dead end crush.

But that doesnt mean you shouldnt go for him. Lol

Nice write.