You're A Collector

You're a collector

that's what you do

you're obsessed with

anything new

I wouldn't touch that

if I were you

You pin it up there

wrapped in plastic

next to the others

you're ecstatic

I could tell you

if only you knew

You can't look now

perfectly preserved

look for more than

you deserve

Yours sincerely,

anything but you

Reviews

[katyj]

You pin it up there
wrapped in plastic
next to the others
you're ecstatic


LOVED this part, this is amazing, love it!

[Maddie:]]

loved the rhythmic flow here, it was nice poem. one of the many poems that could mean anything and everything, depending on how you look at it. those are my favorites.
very lovely, great job here!