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I think what's happened

is that I have somehow excited him

as he awakes to new realities

that there is truly more to see

than what the natural eye perceives

 

a taste here, an offering there

his other senses have been aroused

and now I'm waiting

for his intellectual orgasm to come to an end

it's getting messy

the words come out in an endless stream

I think I got some in my hair

 

so I am hoping

when this oral explosion comes to an end

he will roll over on his back

and sigh

and relax

and sleep

 

I will sneak away

go get a towel, make it warm with water

and gently clean him up

 

please my Dear

rest

 

and after a good long nap

you can wake up and find

that what you've discovered

is really simple

simple and true

yes it can all be exciting

and yes there very well could be some danger involved

depending on how it's handled

but I am choosing

a silent route

cause I want a family

not a war zone life

 

 

so there there

rest your head

take it all in

MY EXPLOSION

 

in my own weakness and searching

you have gotten quite the education, have you not?

 

thank you

 

 

Reviews

[Release]

please shut up. I lower myself only temporarily to come visit your virtual playground.

[Jo Anna Bella]

Exciting your style, your topic and your mystique. Keep 'em coming.

[Vonnette]

Amazing. First of all, your bio (or lack) of one totally drew me in. That was brilliant. The (.) made me wonder and my curiosity got the best of me and I HAD to look. Bravo for being such a creative advertiser. This poem touched me. I think the concept of an "intellectual orgasm" paints a picture of someone exploding with the birth of knowledge. Knowledge is a very powerful, and sexy, instrument. I love the way you merged the two (knowledge and sex). One of my favorites so far!