Broke down (in progress)

In progress

There are times that I stop to think about the day I broke down
There are days that I am still stunned by the silence, so loud
I lie awake at night trying not to focus on the pain
Spurred on by the bravery I am trying to feign

Reviews

[Lizbeth]

Really enjoyed this poem and hope there'll be more coming soon.
Presents so many emotions.
As a single mum can relate to the last line.

[just is]

I really enjoyed this write, amazing writing here

[Remember Courage]

I love the second line it is really sad and somehow scary. I enjoyed this poem even though it is in progress.
-Sabrina

[Jordan A. Wilson]

I like the vibe on this one