Touch

 

 My hands are not soft or smooth

 

 They are rough and calloused

 

 But they can still touch softly

Reviews

[Ruth]

Oohh...nice and concise and yet very powerful!
Full circle and talented....I like this piece a lot xx

[Orlando Murcia]

Nice, it's amazing how looks
can be deceiving

Just because the hands are
rough, it does not mean the touch is

Great write!

Orlando M

[Lady Diana]

nice and comforting

[Tiana]

Short and sweet! Simply wonderful :) Hugs

With such few words you make such a stirring piece.
Rough yet gentle.
Nice write
-ST

[just is]

Wow! These few words just say so much.
Super sweet and wonderful write.

[poetic soul]

says a lot in a very few words...........its a beautiful poem indeed....... :)

Regards,
Poetic Soul

[Aspiring Angel]

Hi Tim,

I am so sorry I have not dropped in for a visit but things have been rather crazy on my side of the screen.
I loved these few simple lines that say so much. The gift to touch a heart and soul is a true gift indeed.
Always a pleasure my friend,
Lesa

[emmajoy]

Oh my, what a ream of meaning in just a few words. This is wonderful, truly wonderful. Lucky the woman who finds this man!

Thank you for sharing.