A Few Attempts at Haiku...

I saw one, and was inspired to finally give it a shot. They're somewhat addicting to write, so there's more than one. Feedback would be greatly appreciated.

Reassurance

 

All of the right words

Just what I wanted to hear

Comfort takes over.

 

 

Writing

 

Emotion pours out

Struggle, tears, smiles, and laughter

I inhale once more.

 

 

Lullaby

 

Sing me those sweet words

Along with that melody

Now, kiss me goodnight.

 

 

Replaced

 

Feeling rejected

How easy you've forgotten

I was your best friend.

 

 

My Legal Drug

 

An ultimate high

As it runs through all my veins

Kiss me once again.

Reviews

[Blake Q Hatfield]

Cool Haiku's

[Ed Rector]

the haiku's work ... origional haiku's were ment to be about seneary and such not as muc emotional ties... i think americans generally disregard this rule and thus i enjopyed your haiku's... my favorite one is the last one 'My legal drug"... well writen and easy to understand... good job and keep it up.