Christmas Present

A Christmas present awaits me,

My heart anticipates with glee.

The joy that it can bring,

Is far beyond imagining.

Hair of auburn hue,

And eyes electric blue,

Dressed in Christmas red and white,

My senses to delight.

Strong is my desire,

To hold my present near,

To tell her of my love,

As I whisper in her ear.

I'll shower her with kisses,

And hold her in my arms.

No need for mistletoe this day,

To coax loves little charms.

The best part of the present,

Is melding two as one,

Yet simple joys precede that,

Unwrapping is such fun.

Reviews

[Aehr]

I love the rhyming, and the way it flows. it's such a super cute poem! :)

[s y e]

The flow of the poem was really good! :-) Well done!
Have a great Christmas!

[Mindfang]

This is awesome Patrick. One day Hallmark will steal from you claim it as their own and i Patrick i will vouch for you.

[Persona]

I love your use of colours Patrick! Very good! The unwrapping bit creates sensual connotations but for all I know you may've meant something more innocent!

[Lunette Lariz]

Oh great. Merry Christmas! Haha. :)

[Dr. Wood ?]

happy Christmas

[Trini]

What a delightful, fun and festive poem! I'm feeling the Christmas spririt!

[Tarry Franck]

Lovely words that flowed so well. Thanks for sharing.

[David Scott]

A truly wonderful gift!
Lovely poem Patrick.

[quinfinn]

you make me miss the love and the sweetness and intimacy of a romantic relationship. very sweet and heartfelt write!