You Fill My Senses~

 

 

Oh! Winds, whisper my words
from petals pure;
flutter these thoughts of devotion
on wing of butterfly

and place them softly
upon his lips
that they may trace our destiny
in waterfall and willow
over mountaintops and meadow green

within feathered glances
upon the same twilight star.

Bring him swirling scents
of my perfume
upon dancing fireflies
to mesmerize his mind
with sweet memories that linger

Fill his dreams with these desires
which awaken me
that he may know my thirst
and feed it, tenderly

as breaths fade softly to a sigh.




♥♥

Reviews

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Oh this poem of fluttering love. Dancing on the wings of butterflies and fireflies. I love these kinds of poems. So Beautiful


Just beautiful


Bring him swirling scents
of my perfume
upon dancing fireflies
to mesmerize his mind
with sweet memories that linger

Fill his dreams with these desires
which awaken me
that he may know my thirst
and feed it, tenderly



Well done

[PerfectFlaw90]

Again, I'm amazed at your skill to paint such a vivid and colorful picture using words as your medium. You just seem to capture everything we hold dear in this world and put it onto paper, with seemingly little effort. As always, a beautiful work.

[Michael Carr]

this is a very beautiful piece. the imagery and style flow seamlessly within this tale of love and romance.
you create a wonderful work that reaches to all while still maintaining a personal tone of your own voice.
really wonderful work angel.

[kollaboratyve]

I love the word choice. You seem to know how to place words to give the effect that you are looking for. You have a sharp eye for metaphors, This is a good write!!!!!!!