Age

Its been a long time since i have written
I have been far away from the pen and paper
Like water and a little kitten
To and fro to work as i go day to day 
Age is catching up November 4th i closed 25 hurrah
what more is in store for me i wonder ahead
Every night as i think i drop asleep sound in my bed
As i wake up and try to remember what i had thought
That's when i hear my mother shout, Its late for work aren't you going
I think to my self is this worth something really i am doing
Cos everyday its the same thing i do,Why cant life be different for a few.
I always choose to write that's the best , For actions speaks louder than words i was told. When i write i will have these to show even when I'm old.
That for real these are words of description of not only how i feel
but spoken to many who find this quite not the real deal
so i guess i spoke on behalf what every one would like to say.
on a simple note just live and love your life for today. 
Do what you dream off and not stay glued to your chair.
the more you love your life the more Happiness you going to bare.....
Gerald David

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Sitting at home in front of a computer day and night is no way to experience the world, that's for sure. Your rhyming is good and you office some wise life advice here. You are 25....you have many years to experience all there is to see and do in this world. Lydi**

[Gee]

Good poem Jerry,sound advice.I've written something similar called"life's clock"which you might enjoy.Take care

[Jerry]

Thank all of u for the reviews and ur comments

[Lizardo]

Those are real words of wisdom
An excellent poem, you are a great writer
I really like it