Insanity Note

This is one of my favorites(:

i have a disease,
it creeps inside me,
it calls my name,
i am its slave,
its called insanity,
i blankly follow,
where it says to go,
even if it ends my life for sure,
i have no will,
to tell it to stop,
i have no strength,
to put it on lock,
i simply follow,
this simple disease,
its mine,
i call it insanity,
its with me as i sleep,
it lays and it creeps,
along my bed,
it keeps telling me what it said,
i am ur mind,
i am your soul,
keep me locked,
somewhere cold,
it tears me places,
all inside,
it rips me anywhere,
it decides,
i cant control it,
if i could,
i would,
help this disease,
as i should,
i want it dead,
i want it gone,
but its mine,
forever spun,
it grew inside me,
from the darkest of hells,
it rings inside me,
like the loudest bells,
i hate this life,
thats full of strife,
it simply kills me,
inside and out,
this simple disease,
called insanity,
please help me kill it,
with the best of strength,
i cant beat it myself,
its just more pain,
its a simple disease,
thats lays inside me,
it grows bigger and bigger,
its called insanity.

Author's Note

again tell me wat you think honestly(:

Reviews

[Black Cat Fever]

This is fantastic. You describe mental illness just as it is, a controlling disease that leads the victim often times to hell and a desire for suicide. It's crippling and takes over the person. I like the way you wrote this too, like you're talking to someone.
You did a really excellent job.

[Tina Kline]

I think you did a great job, you describe this situation just as it is. Very honest.

[Zach]

Thank you hun I do my bezt(: