Shelter

Sovereign Creator shield those I love

Place your angels around every soul I know

Let your spirit and word restore, deliver, protect and heal

Spirit of Yahusha Hamashiach speak 

Let your word return not empty but accomplish your will

Today remove my flesh from the unforeseen realm

Father forgive my selfish ways and tongue that have curse those I love

Yah come and fight for my children, family and me

Remove every demon, deity, spirit and spells that has caused me to be bound 

Yah draw near and release the chains their have placed on me

Take these scars and wash me in your love

Mercy, salvation and grace once again

Allow me to give you praise

I AM hold me tight and when things make no sense

Grant me hope so I can give you praise.

Reviews

[JayG]

Okay, this is your personal "prayer." What makes it a poem? The language isn't poetic, and you aren't making use of prosody. And since it's addressed to a third person who I doubt is a member of this site, it seems more an attempt to impress the reader (or perhaps Jesus) than a communication between you and your deity.

Basically, you're saying, "I don't care what you have planned, this is what I want, which seems more like hubris than prayer.