Fabled Desire

Febrile notions

Concocted of fable

Desires

Dance in the

Inky shadows of

The distant sunrise

Passion exhaled

Upon the star 

Glittered night

Billowing skyward

Tasting of Cinnamon spice

Brazen fantasies

Samba with vigor

On moonflower fragrance

Sailing across the breeze

Fusing false ideas

Of what will never be  

Reviews

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

love your poetry, even though we write a bit differently, you don't have to use 15 million words to get your point across.....you do an awesome job just the way you write. Lovely!

[Poetic Beauty]

I haven't written a long piece for quite awhile. Thank you Neva for this kind review

[Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm]

me either, the one I posted today was the longest in awhile and it took me quite awhile to finish it. So much going on in my life right now with my father.

[Poetic Beauty]

Hope things.get better. Lot going on here too

[Leslie Philibert]

Lots of things to like here..febrile is a great word, and I really like the first two lines of the last verse, this poem has a light,goodtime feeling which contrasts well with the serious last image, good write.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Reality sure has a way of tainting our fantasies... darn that real life... another excellent right full of wisdom.

[Poetic Beauty]

Reality can be a bit of a assmonkey at times

[Sami Khalil]

Nice write.

[Jibey]

A pleasing fusiuon of images of desire, passion and fantasy... with heavenly associations and shadowy movement...s ot aht what we long for eludes our grasp... Nicely composed... :-)

[Tate Morgan]

A quiet evening a warm night Dreaming on a star

[Wondering Mind]

Fantasy born from the turn on of sensation...Fantastic and sensational...Carlos was making his guitar speak as I read the last stanza. Samba is a fitting move for this read.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thanks. This piece is fill with emotion and I like to add abstract ideas to get my ideas across and you picked up on tjem well

[Michael X]

a flowing breeze and skyline expression, the words float along the idea
with an artistic sense of knowing, a poem of intricacies of the 5 senses
and into the 6th, beautifully written and expressed insight. amazing

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you for the kind review. It was a hard thought to put on paper and I am sure people will take different ideas from it that is the beauty of poetry

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing words. I had to read twice. I love how you use the language. Make poetry a pleasure read and enjoy. Few real fables have good endings. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Layla J Omorose]

A fabled desire is a desire that burns the past the body and into the soul, That has the spirit flying through the flames of sinful passion wanting to be touched by its lust filled flames. Good write

[Poetic Beauty]

I think many people will take different things from this piece. You have come really close to what a fable desire is for me. Thank you for reading.

[Layla J Omorose]

your welcome