Chaotic Mind

One of those moments when you can't help but worry and wish it could be changed

Mind chaotic with thoughts

In total consuming disarray

Words forming  without

But no way out

Praying this night

Ends on a peaceful

tranquil note

Hoping with all power

That the car stays 

On the road

Wishing it was different

That I could be there

Instead of stranded

Without you near.

Fear grips the mind

As worry set in

Safe passage is all I ask

Reviews

[Deneru Yamada]

Cool! I like it! :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Yes I have had many a moments like this... nice expression of panic and fear.

[Poetic Beauty]

writing about it for me lessens the anxiety and the worry.

[Aidz]

Flowed nicely with a steady composed rhythm :)