Lady Night

Lady Night dances

Under the moonlight glow

Gracefully spreading her wings

Reaching her feathers

Across the midnight sky

 

Glittering the horizon

With twinkling stars

As the peace begins

To spread silently

Across the sleeping land

 

She entices lovers

With her shielding veil

The romances the heart

As to sets of lips

Caress and reunite 

Reviews

[ChristianM]

Your words flow as if they were never meant to be apart. Many times I read or write poetry myself that forces the reader to stop and reread a line either to understand it or get their bearings, like perhaps they skipped a line. Your poems are effortless in that the reader is captivated without stop from beginning to end. Bravo

[Poetic Beauty]

When I write a piece I usually have an image in my mind along with inspiration of personal emotions so I try to weave a story out of the piece.

[Phantom Heart]

"Under the moonlight glow"
I love it! :)

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you

[Judas Hammer]

very nice piece. It put me at easy and was visual. I liked it alot

[Poetic Beauty]

I am glad you felt the peace and were able to picture this.

[Dream Weaver]

Smooth as silk Kristina...

[Poetic Beauty]

I am glad you enjoy this piece. My favorite time of day is the night time in spring and summer.

[Dream Weaver]

Night-time was my favorite time that is until I got old :( But I'm with you on Spring & Summer

[Poetic Beauty]

I think I shall always be that way. My grammie was a night person always. lol

[Dream Weaver]

Well you're following in her footsteps for certain! :)

[Veronica Chandler]

A very nice write here and I enjoy the cool looking format; my favorite part is the idea that peace spreads in the night is a delight to my senses with the lines,
"As the peace begins
To spread silently
Across the sleeping land"
While we sleep...peace is out there spreading...beautiful

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. Many times with different things in nature I will give them a personality.

[Veronica Chandler]

It brings your pieces to life and to me everything in nature is alive and has a personality, so I sincerely appreciate when you bring them together on the page.