Decadent Antipaction

Read at your own risk risk 😂 Just for you Lorry

A delicious temptation
Laid carefully in full view
Visually pleasing to the eyes

Delicate full curves beckon
Soft lips begin to quiver
In anticipation of a taste

The mouth waters with hunger
As the sweet morsel teases
In a beautiful display

Decadent layers lay perfect
Frosted in smooth chocolate
With intricate fancy ripples

A visually pleasing sight
Of a rich bittersweet fudge
Begging to be tasted fully

Topped with crimson raspberries
Plump and ready to be plucked
Off clouds of whipped cream

Oh scrumptious black velvet cake
How I want to devour you
With ravenous abandon

Reviews

[Lorry]

Well, now for my usual guesstimate at the hidden meaning in this one!
So, if it pleases the court your honor (I heard that in a Columbo episode), let's look at the evidence the accused has willingly provided us, shall we?
You see your honour how she speaks of delicate curves and intricate fancy ripples to try throwing us off the scent, with not a single "I need a grown up" warning in sight!
Can't you see the invisible smirk on the accuseds face, as she has the audacity to sully your good court by turning up wearing that nuns outfit with a saintly look on her face? I mean, when have you ever seen a nuns outfit it wipedown leather, with stiletto boots and leather prayer beads?
And the fragrance of the last verse that actually states it is about a black velvet cake!
I think we can all see the subtle hints and indeed know what this is about a love egg, ribbed for her pleasure!
😃
That took me about half an hour to write because I had to stop and wipe my eyes from laughing so much!
And I finally get to read one of yours where I don't need a proper grown up with me or getting all flusterated and raspberry faced!
Now I could really go for munching down some of that sweet velvety goodness and ARGHH! I knew it! I've caught innuendoitis! (It's like the sexy version of seeing everything through Rose tinted glasses. I think they call it nymphomonacles or something similar! 😃
So very well done PB. Now go get hosed off and make your way to the not so naughty step!
😃

[Poetic Beauty]

When I said I would write a poem about chocolate cake just for you I never said it would have a PG rating lmao 😜 PS I sure hope the cake wasn’t made with pleasure eggs 🤣🤣🤣

[Poetic Beauty]

And I will have you know my glasses are tinted violet purple and crimson red with a hint of sky blue

[Lorry]

True, you did not. I half expected it to be one of those rudely shaped cakes people are always posting their ire about on that interweb thingy... I thing they call them something like chocolate bildo cakes, but come to think of it I think they spell chocolate without a C! 😃

[Lorry]

You have vurpleroo glasses? Mine are only the rose tinted variety, which takes me back! 😃

[Poetic Beauty]

I use to have rose tinted glasses but unfortunately life has and it’s many trials has change the tint of those lol

[Stella Armour]

decadent dark chocolate dripping from my lips .... the tingle of raspberries .... long time no taste but oh the memories 😋

[Poetic Beauty]

There is something special about a decadent chocolate cake. I haven’t had any for quite sometime either

[Stella Armour]

it's the dark chocolate bars that i buy and let the squares just melt in my mouth .... drooling happy 😋

[Poetic Beauty]

I love to let chocolate melt in my mouth there is something about the smooth silky texture

[Gee]

Having been on a "16 hour" fasting diet since the beginning of January I could quite easily eat this poem and you too if you were sugar coated and stood still.for long enough:)
I'm constantly starving

[Poetic Beauty]

That’s tough. I don’t know that I could do that but I do go long periods without eating.

[Dave W.]

I gained 5 pounds reading this, well done.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. Lorry actually gave me the idea for writing and erotic poem about cake of all things. Glad you enjoyed this poem

[Dave W.]

I imagine eating such things and then being haunted by Willford Brimley's ghost, hearing a faint "Diabeetus" in the room.

[Poetic Beauty]

I’m am trying to be more careful about the food I get. I am portion controlling and trying not to over indulge on sweets daily but I haven’t completely cut anything out. Just limiting the amounts and how often. Chocolate especially cakes, brownies and muffins are my downfall

[Dave W.]

Mine are White chocolate chip cookies with Macadamia nuts