Lying Serpent

The waves methodically sway moving in and out
As the serpent slithers upon the dark sandy shore
It's starts spewing drivel in loud grand shouts

The noise driving me to the brink of insanity
What a boastful cantankerous liar the creature is
Lying about how it does love to all of humanity

The fueled anger is now orbiting in the salty air
Reminder, never consort with a vengeful snake
That abuse the truth, about how they really do care.

Reviews

[Millionth Muse]

This piece is rather abstract, and I absolutely love it. I think that you've captured something qutie amazing here...I'm especially drawn to the last stanza. This is a great metaphor for life in general...some people are snakes, and we must steer clear of those in order to preserve our own sanity. Kudos to you!

[Antonio Valentino]

Hey, tell me how you really feel about me!
What?
It wasn't about me?

Dang, even bad breath is better than no breath.
:P

Seriously, this was very good Poetic!
I'm very impressed!

Antonio

[The Analog Kid]

Real cool. I was trying to imagine how to weave those words together!