Spellbound (really short story)

Love's Magic

Magic sparkled permeating in the warm air.  It is so strong, so sweet that it was almost tangible.  With each laugh and smile the magic was growing in strength until everyone at the party was feeling it's glimmer.  Love was seeping into every minute cell in the room.

As the young couple entered the room standing close to each other, the party guest could see the electric sparks flowing from the man to the woman and from the woman to the man.  The couple is completely spellbound by each other and never notice any one else in the room.  They keep gazing at each other with half open eyes and broad white smiles.  They may not notice anyone, but everyone notices them.  They are the couple that is causing the overflow of Love's great magic.

Author's Note

I will add more to this story later. It is an older one and I wanted to get what I already had written put on here before i start adding to it.

Reviews

[Xardalas]

I like this story as well. The detail in some parts of it is amazing, I can see it in my mind's eye as they walk into the room. Although I noticed what might have been a few errors, like this one for example. "As the young couple entered the room standing close to each other, the party guest could see the electric sparks flowing from the man to the woman and from the woman to the man." I do not know if this was intended but it says party guest instead of party guests. I believe that you might have meant it to be plural because of what it says here "They may not notice anyone, but everyone notices them." I get the feeling that means that there is more than one guest attending the party. However you have my apologies if I have misread it or misunderstood what you meant.

[Subjective Sanity]

Well stated. I never experienced the perspective of the guests but, I have from the couple. That whole "everything else is wallpaper" feeling. I get that. It makes me wonder if people saw it like that when I was feeling it. Well written.

[Bette]

lol i have read this and i almost posted my spell bound today! i am glad that i didn't! well done.