Dawn

As the morning light

Kisses the horizon

A new day dances

with brilliant magic

As the vivid display

Changes the velvet 

into a creative ethereal

artwork 

Reviews

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Always love a beautiful dawn morning. Stunning imagery. Nicely done.

[Wondering Mind]

It is always at dawn, as you have nicely expressed, a beautiful and natural display of art.

[Octob3r Star]

Sweet

[Mauricio Montoya]

Wow! Very good for short piece i can visualize as read I'm there and when I say I like how it comes together it’s because the words to me just blend in to fit and then I’ll say excellent write cause for me that’s art.

[Larry Dyson]

you the planet I embrace...morning light kissing the horizons full mouth of daybreak..exploring the velvet of you..as the artwork of the etheral

[Michael G.]

Good read. Though in Line #2 "horizon..." and in line #3, shouldn't it read "A" new day dances?
Sorry about being so blatant about the corrections. I hate to see something this beautiful lessened by simple mistakes.
Keep writing!

[Brianna Brie]

This is an uplifting poem! Great way to start the day.