A dedication to my mother who through it all has been by my side teaching me and guiding me in the right direction. The one who loves me for all my faults and give me the strength and knowledge.
My mother is going through a tough time right now. She has had some health issues but remains strong and still manages to help me and my sisters when the world isn't such a shiny place. SHe hasn't miss one day of work and still manages to spend time with her grandchildren. I admire my mother's strength love compassion and beauty, greatly.
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The wings are there, seen with the third eye they spread to envelop you when life threatens, or lift you when your wings are weary. Such a heartfelt and joyous celebration of the mother who nurtured your spirit. I lift her up in prayer, That she regains her vibrancy and health to soar once again.
We all need that one person in our life who will push us beyond our limits. Not because they want us to fail but because they know we can do more than what this world says we can do. They make us believe that our dreams are only dreams if we allow ourselves to embrace them. Dreams come true. I, myself, wish I had such a person. Loved this poem! J'adore!
Posted 13 Years Ago
13 Years Ago
My mother is a great person always making us want to be better and there to support us when we need .. read moreMy mother is a great person always making us want to be better and there to support us when we need it.
wow I love it and I was wonderng if this was about your mother haha I was correct and u did an amazing job on this poem an dI could tell u really love and appreciate your mom and I hope everything with your mother gets better soon :)
The greatest things come of what we can't see; a seed burried in the soil will become the mighty redwood tree. Steadfast, as a pillar of strength, even if her wings did show she would not fly due to her amazing stubborness (best part of the poem IMO). I think this is a wonderful dedication to your mother :) I'm certainly inspired. Thanks PB! Nice write.
Posted 13 Years Ago
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13 Years Ago
my mother is a pillar of strength compassion and is spiritual. Note I said spiritual not religious... read moremy mother is a pillar of strength compassion and is spiritual. Note I said spiritual not religious. She loves God and has instilled this in me and my sisters as did my grandmother and we were taught to accept others and different cultures and religions.
I can see my mother through the mirror of your wonderful poem.
She is everybody's mother.
She is my mother too.
She will always remain strong and supportive through ages.
We pray for her early recovery
Posted 13 Years Ago
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13 Years Ago
I was hoping other could relate without seeing just my mom glad you did
13 Years Ago
I feel very fortunate that I could relate this with your help and support.
Great tribute because mothers no matter what stay strong in spirit therefore the title fits and so do these words in what you're trying to say, I want to thank you for sharing this with us and I will keep you in my prayers.
Your friend Mauricio
The wings are there, seen with the third eye they spread to envelop you when life threatens, or lift you when your wings are weary. Such a heartfelt and joyous celebration of the mother who nurtured your spirit. I lift her up in prayer, That she regains her vibrancy and health to soar once again.
First off I'm on here to post my writing to have an outlet for my emotions. You will find a variety of poems. If you like take a moment and stroll through this poets mind.
Secondly be kind to each .. more..