My Imagination

Taking it back once again... The third poem I ever wrote.

 

My Imagination

I want to ride a cloud over my obscure existence,

fall asleep in a crescent moon while whispering my dreams 

knowing that God is listening.

And there I’ll invest a lifetime and since words are life I’ll procreate with one rhyme.

I will create without consequence, 

in God time is no longer prevalent so as a child eternity is spent.

I’ll spend the night on His doorstep just for inspiration,

write altogether different because His fingertips are upon my imagination.

If I had wings I would fly to a place where hard times could be explained, bad memories erased, so I could dream again...

Put piece of mind in a frame and feel free again be called by an altogether different name.

It is there I can be who I am forgetting what I never was,

take hold of reality with the hand of faith and write with the pen of God’s love… In my imagination.

Reviews

[Lyrical Love]

CHILLS, AND SPRINKLES OF GOLD DUST THAT CARRY LITTLE CYMBALS THAT PLAY A melody OF SERENITY (IN MY MIND, BODY, AND SPIRIT) THAT LEAVE ME STILLED...
trying to put into words what my soul feels in the vast comfort of your GREAT imagery, and GOD's eye view of the
relationship that you have in loving HIM (and what he demands of us..to LOVE!).
***I'll spend the night on His doorstep just for inspiration,
write altogether different because His fingertips are upon my imagination.*** MARVIN, WHAT A THOUGHT TO PONDER!! I try to stay in that realm, and not become enticed by the world-I can go to your poetry/writings and feel the peace in being there...Thank you!!
...and BRAVO!!

[darkgurl]

"take hold of reality with the hand of faith and write with the pen of God's love� In my imagination." These lines here are just wonderful. Lovely write here can feel the emotion in this. You are a gifted writer, you show talent in yoru words....Kim

[darkgurl]

"take hold of reality with the hand of faith and write with the pen of God's love� In my imagination." These lines here are just wonderful. Lovely write here can feel the emotion in this. You are a gifted writer, you show talent in yoru words....Kim

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This is more of like a poem prose to me than a poem poetry...But indeed, I liked it..
Beautiful imagery and very vivid it is..But I guess you need to work on the flow..
Overall, A great write!

[Bill Grimes Jr.]

"I will create without consequence,"

A hymn of passion and artistic spirit......I especially love the way you delve deeply into your subject.....gently discecting it's core.......patiently focusing on each word.....well done my friend!

Peace,

Bill

[Spat Queen]

I would be a fool to give my opinion of your work coming from a place where my own abilities reside. At any rate I was curious if you could write so well about something more abstract- less meaningful.

[Lindsey:)]

Wow. this is definately my kind of write.
you really know how to word things the write way.
I can see pictures in my head.



"I want to ride a cloud over my obscure existence,"
I love that line.

You do such a good job.

Thanks for all of the reviews.
It helps Alot.
-Lindsey

[~ Luna Moth ~]

Mannnn. I'm really diggin this one. And for it to be the third poem you've ever written, shows the depth of your talent. Kudos!!

I'm gonna post my third poem ever written...check it out...it's "What I Would Give."

:-D

[QuietPoet]

Its beautiful.