Egocentric Viewpoint

poem

 

 

 

Egocentric viewpoint.

 

My universe :If I should die

would disappear. I’ll tell you why

Each day I wake up and renew

 everything in my purview.

 

Though this may sound like fantasy

 it is in fact reality.

We all create the world we

and ring the changes as we go

 

through all the tests life throws at us.

We are not so autonomous

we can ignore the salient facts

that everybody interacts.

 

Your universe and mine combine

although they’re similar in design

they still retain their unity.

We tend to see things differently.

 

Although the world will still exist

This is the truth I must insist.

My universe will cease to be,

 it has no purpose without me.

 

16-Jul-08

 

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Reviews

[yinseriv]

I tend not to review poetry because I just don't know enough to tell what is good and what isn't. To be honest I rarely read poetry with just a few exceptions. Your work is one of those exceptions. I can always find a clear message in an easily readable format. The poems are so well designed that they look simple and effortless, which tells me you put a lot of thought and work into them.

Thank you for the effort and time you put forth.

[Adela Muresan]

Hmm� an interesting poem about perception.
I liked the cadence of it, makes it very pleasurable.

A.M.