interdependence

sonnet

 

 

Interdependence

 

I go where my lady goes.

Because I need her I suppose

I need her more than she needs me.

 Though doubtless she would not agree.

Where she is you will find me

 because that’s where I want to be.

We have achieved togetherness

 Our partnerships a great success

For I need her and she needs me

for us it works efficiently

 A mutual dependency which binds

us but still leaves us free.

To act as independently

as we feel any need to be.

 

4-Aug-08

 

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Reviews

[A.M.P.]

That was beautiful. =) It shows true love and loyalty, and that's the best thing in the world! Great job, very good!

[Sharon Miller Bolander]

Very catchy flow/rhyming scheme and a very heart-warming poem! I feel much the same about my husband and myself. :-) Sharon

[a]

Almost a song! Words flew through me like birds. Nice! And that is the best relationship anyone could ever wont - love built, built one doesn't rule upon other! I like this poem, so simple and full of thoughts.