Not my Concern

Not my Concern

A Poem by Poeticpiers
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Not my concern
 
The night was dark and damp and cold.
The match girl’s matches still unsold.
The passers by ignored her pleas
 what she was selling failed to please.
 
An orphan child without a home.
 By circumstances forced to roam
She earns enough to pay her way
 but not today, but not today.
 
Ill clad in rags and frozen through
her tiny hands and feet are blue.
The freezing rain turns into snow
The match girl has nowhere to go.
 
Without money, she cannot buy
 a night in somewhere warm and dry.
She tries in vain to sell her wares
 Without success, nobody cares.
 
The falling snow was getting deep
and still she had no place to sleep.
 Although she tried in vain to find
some shelter from the freezing wind.
 
This was the night the match girl died.
They found her frozen stiff beside
 the local convents well barred door.
The little Sisters of the Poor.
 
Had not been very sisterly.
 Ignored the orphans misery
because they did not choose to see.
 Now kindly death has set her free.
 
No longer needs the charity
 which they denied so easily
 by pious women who profess
 to proffer aid to the helpless.
 
I do not claim to be guilt free
 but I make no pretence to be
a Little sister of the poor
 and let a child freeze at my door.
 
I am quite sure they will
deny any responsibility
and call her death an accident.
They could nothing to prevent.
 
I should not judge but feel I must
express my feelings of disgust
That this child was allowed to die
for lack of Christian charity.
 
Although this happened long ago
There’s very little changed I know.
We’re still prepared to pass them by
 and care not if they live or die.
 
We can pretend they don’t exist
 an attitude which will persist
As long as we don’t choose to see
 They’re our responsibility.
 
12-Aug-08

© 2008 Poeticpiers


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Extremelly sad in several ways... You did a wonderful job with the flow and rhyme, very well written. It is true, times have not changed, people still do not see, or turn a blind eye to someone in need. I liked how you entered into it that you would not be like those before, would not let a child die at your door. The write is very intense and meaningful. Maybe, just maybe you will reach someone and they will not let a chld die at their door either. Congratulations on a excellant write.

Posted 17 Years Ago


This is a very strong poem reinforced by his its almost sloganeered rhyme and your right take in an interest in the poor is very important. I volunteer for the homeless and the reasons why people end of this situation are varied but 40% grew up in care. A very compassionate poem, Sel

Posted 17 Years Ago



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Poeticpiers
Poeticpiers

Near Durham city UK, United Kingdom



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72years, young married. Ex police officer Ex social worker. interests Reading and writing poetry Painting and drawing in coloured pencil avid reader,sci fi fantasy crime. comparitive religion and esp... more..