No change

sonnet

 

No change

 

 

If you had been where I have been

 and you had seen the things I’ve seen.

The you would know as much as me

and perhaps more quite probably.

The things which caught my interest,

 the places which I loved the best

Would seem quite different to you.

You’d see them from your point of view.

If I were you and you were me.

I wonder would we disagree

or do as we do presently,

Accept that we feel differently

not unexpectedly.Content

there is no cause for argument.

 

13-Aug-08

 

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Reviews

[Fran Marie]

A great sonnet so nicely expressed

and well written my friend~Fran Marie

[Salvatore Buttaci]

I love your poem, but it's not a coin poem. Can you make it one and enter it?

Sal

[angelina neves]

:) lovely! I suppose we are all different because we see from a different point each time we look at the same thing, and that is the most interesting thing about human beings!