Nice Try

cynical sonnet

 

 

 

Nice try,

 

I am a Christian gentleman.

I would like to, if you agree

to fall in with my little plan

 to get to know you Biblically.

She was well read; she slapped his face.

She knew exactly what he meant

and put him firmly in his place.

She made her anger evident

She was quite pleased though secretly,

 that he found her desirable

but did not want to let him see

 that she might be persuadable.

His chat up line original

its chance of success minimal.

 

21-Aug-08

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Reviews

[Poeticpiers]

Sorry can't read review Memory problems on the site

[Voltaire Mephisto (aka ..]

Your poems always make me grin.

[Cuppie]

That's a hilarious poem and a spooky pastor to be near with.
Somebody got to FIRE that Pastor!
Can't wait for another fabulous poem!

[Lyrical Love]

Oh my the creepy Pastor
creative
thought provoking
and
diferent.