Crazt Antics

variant Sonnet

 

 

 

Crazy Antics,

 

I watched an ant and wondered why.

 He was convinced he had to try

to climb a grass stem to the top

 and down the other side none stop.

Why did he feel he had to climb?

It was a complete waste of time.

But Ants do what they want to do

I know because I’ve watched a few.

I don’t think ants are very bright,

 they very seldom get it right.

Though I can’t think the way ants do.

He might have had good reason to

 climb to the top and down again.

Or just may be he was insane.

 

10-Sep-08

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Reviews

[Adela Muresan]

Hmm�the poem has a good euphony but I really didn't like the last verse in witch you insinuated that the little ant was insane.
Ants can't be ,,stupid,, insects since they manage to built themselves such systemized homes.

A.M.