Trivialities

Sonnet

 

 

 

Trivialities .

 

It’s little things that drive you wild.

Way past the point of no return

All though by nature meek and mild.

Eventually the worm will turn.

 Into a monster seeking blood.

 Something you do unconsciously

can often be misunderstood.

Because you do it constantly

 As if you meant to irritate

Although are quite unaware

you’re partner becomes so irate

That with an axe he parts your hair.

That’s why you’re dead and I’m in here
your habit was too much to bear.

 

17-Sep-08

Reviews

[A sea person]

Interesting. I like the metaphor you use... The ending seems a tad bit too violent for the situation to me, but I suppose if that's what you want.

Well written!

v.r.
Ryan