Why should you believe me? for M lady Helena

narrative verse

 

 

Why should you believe me?

 

I guarantee that you can be

 from this day forth quite vampire free..

Don’t turn away, listen to me

It is quite free there is no fee.

 

I do not ask that you pay me

 nor even ask you to agree.

Vampires can bite so suddenly

and then you live eternally.

 

 Driven by hunger constantly

you will thirst uncontrollably.

Every throbbing throat you see

 as a meal tantalisingly.

 

 If this is what you want to be.

Then just ignore me pointedly

 As people do ignorantly.

In my opinion foolishly.

 

No crucifix can guarantee

your permanent security.

From a blood drinking entity

 Who has selected you to be.

 

 Provider of his energy

He’ll drink your life blood thirstily.

You should consider carefully

this awful possibility.

 

Because there is no remedy.

Once bitten you’re condemned to be

 numbered amongst the enemy

and will be so eternally

 

It is your choice you are quite free.

 To turn away mistakenly.

 Convinced that I talk crazily

 Although I’m offering honestly.

 

That I can truly guarantee

 that I can make you permanently.

Quite safe from any vampire who might be

 regarding you as possibly.

 

A victim he can easily

 subdue because you foolishly.

 Refuse advice that’s offered free.

Perhaps you doubt my honesty.

 

So go your way but carefully

 I cannot force you to agree.

Although choice saddens me.

 I will continue hopefully.

 

To offer folks the chance to be

 protected permanently for free.

from dangers which they do not see.

 Although they threaten constantly.

 

The vampires walk abroad quite free

 from questions of morality.

They can appear to be friendly

 Before they pounce on you greedily.

 

So take my warning seriously

Some friends are not what they seem to be.

You can be fooled so easily

 by monsters acting charmingly.

 

7-Oct-08

 

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Reviews

[poddar kushal]

I like , infact love the rythm here.

[forfila]

I like this. It makes a lot of sense to me.

I heed the advice my friend.
Nice write.