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With broken wings no bird can fly,

enjoy the freedom of the sky

But wings can heal and often do.
This is the hope I offer you.

Like broken hearts can be repaired.

 As you will find if you’re not scared

 then you will find a love that’s true

This is the hope I offer you.

You have a dream and must believe.

If you persist you will achieve

Discard whatever’s stopping you.

This is the hope I offer you

So grasp this chance and hold on tight

 and everything will turn out right.

 

15-Oct-08

 

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[Wildecat]

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