Seasoned travellers

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Seasoned Travellers

 

In dreams I travel where I will.

Although I do not have the skill

 to dictate where I want to go

Some people can do this I know.
They have acquired mastery

so they can control completely.

The content of their lucid dreams

Just as they like or so it seems

They tell me if I practice hard

 in time I will gain my reward

Be free to travel astral

 to anywhere I want to be

But until then I must make do

not knowing where I’m going to.

 

22-Nov-0

 

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Reviews

[Syke]

"Be free to travel astral" has only 7 syllables, unless you stretch out astral as as-te-ral. It's a really good poem written in prose and the use of restrictive syllables is nice. The subject is great and I can tell the poem is inspired! Dreams are everyone's muse.

[Tammy]

Very nice.....